All Comments on 'An Unexpected Turn Ch. 02'

You are a great writer. I've been looking for new stuff from you. I like this one a lot, but it needs another proofread.

A good read with a few shortcomings, but you know that already. Get to work on the third installment.

I enjoyed this quick reading snack. This staccato style works great to get me into the story. I’m looking forward to reading this as it develops more depth.

Ok, I feel cheated there isn't a part 3 or more yet and it has been years. I will hope that you will wake up from your big sleep and resume this story! It's a terrific one.