All Comments on 'An Unusual Gift Ch. 04'

This was a slightly shorter chapter than usual as there wasn't a good break point between where this chapter ends and chapter 5.

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Love this story

was fun at first...now the main characters are just assholes.....no longer interested and will not read anymore

this chapter's a bit overly cliche innit? also agree with below poster, characters escalated into just being dicks pretty quick.

It’s a fun and extremely entertaining read.

I definitely didn't want or expected to see gay stuff. (Heavy sigh). But, lo and behold, you did give a warning at the beginning of the first chapter, it's just that I missed it. Stupid me. (Another heavy sigh). A pity; I got invested in this story. I'm all for Abby using the collar on the MC, Jack, and I actually hoped for some sexy femdom between them, but I'm not into male gay stuff.

Leaving the gay shit behind this story is ok

Scores 3/5 because of the gay shit