by Bazzza
I enjoyed this tale, one of love and passion and with no adultery or infidelity. A nice change of pace. Thanks to the author for a well written, imaginative (?) story.
Another sensual entertaining offering - becoming a habit I see. Also, it appears you hit home runs early in your efforts as well.
Needless to say and to compliment, you seem to have mastered the art of the erotic and sensual without offending your readership, yet you have maintained an interesting and entertaining edge.
Author - we appreciate your talent and imagination done in a lifelike manner portraying as it were a slice of semi-normal reality and respect. With High Regard
I like your stories because I never really know what's coming next. In this one you played it straight all the way and it was great. Very well done.
very erotic!
good writing.
what more can be said but thank you for great fun.
I liked this because it featured four mature adults all trying something new, but being careful and considerate of each other. Maybe it's not too realistic for that reason. LOL. Not sure I'd try that activity myself (being filmed). The story correctly points out you can never be sure there's not a bootleg copy out there somewhere. You can kiss running for political office goodbye. <g> Best, Ken
Bazzza you did great with that story but find yourself an editor in the story Rob And Simmone told Mark to hand over the original and the edited version of the tape Mark better hope rob doesnt find out he held back one.
Pat .
Atlanta,Ga
Reading the comments other leave is entertaining...comments about your characters being hated and all that rot. It really makes me laugh. I guess it's the ultimate compliment to your writing skills that you have people moralizing about your characters. Me I assume its fiction and I'm content with reading a wonderfully written story. You are able to put into words what a character is thinking and feeling with skill and alacraty.
hmm, I think I need to stop writing and continue reading some of your other selections.
Your couple had a towel they used after sex.
My wife and I put the towel down first; no wet spot, and it's handy right afterward.