All Comments on 'Anal Nurse Ch. 03'
by patty_parker60
- 14 Comments
Thelivingwordover 5 years agoI have been enjoying this story though I have to say the grammar spelling and word stings need work. I'd be happy to edit any work you would like me to. That being said longer more in depth chapters would be appreciated and enjoyed I do hope my criticism has been constructive.
patty_parker60over 5 years agoAuthorPraise from one such as yourself is truly dear to my heart, DEAR HEART...As U know, U are one of my favorite writers of the genre...many many kisses
patty_parker60over 11 years agoAuthorNever FEAR, more stories, even NASTIER
than this, are on the way...I have a NEW
name I write under (patty_parker60), and
all future "tales" will appear under that
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tanker2123almost 13 years agoi was just really looking for the exchange between these two from chapters two to three. i just didnt like on my way to the nurses office in chapter two to on my knees in the nurses offices in chapter three. i just hate that the foreplay and seduction was skipped. i love the story and keep them coming.
asian_buttfreakover 18 years agoI find the "build-up" to Chapter & 4 kept me on the verge of release as I waited for both be posted; the background of the characters didn't bother me, as I know that hot, hot lesbian anal sex will soon be following.
lesbian_slutmomover 18 years agoI was experimenting with a different style (fleshing-out the character a bit more than usual) and so it took a bit longer to get to the sex. I hope it is as hot to read as it was to write!
laura_manusover 18 years agoWhat else is new? I was waiting (anxiously) for the next chapter (after #2) and I was not disappointed! Great in all aspects
britisha_luvs_anlover 18 years agogreat writing, as always...would be interested in campaining for PRIME MINISTER? Someone would do well to loosen-up some of the tight arses in Parliment! Looking forward to the next time we collaborate...
Anonymousover 18 years agoi knew that this installment would be the one that blew my stockings off! head nurse irinia really knows how to "work that thang!" i hope literotica approves chapter 4 as quickly!
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