All Comments on 'Anal Ravishment'

That's it.

Please spell check and, even more, proof read your work carefully. There are so many typos and wrong words that your story is hard to read.

who knew a motorcycle riding Dominatrix could have so much passion just beneath the surface, and, an anal fetish....shivers....and it makes me wonder if you put yourself in the place of the giver..or the one receiving...i wonder...and hands above head is always such a nice touch...i'd probably have said.."takes her feminine wrists in my strong, working man's hands and looks deep into her eyes as i raise them above her head...stretching her up..her ribs, that i will be counting with my tongue shortly...very visible now, and her brow furrowing with the now familiar and welcome bit of pain this causes eveident on her pretty face"...but then thats me...your work is beautiful...carry on .....T