All Comments on 'Ananya's Adevnture'

My suggestion would be to not carry this on any further. Did you notice that that the title of your story has a spelling error? The rest is crappy anyway.

Dont bother finishing it

10 inch cock? Why stop at that? Make it 15 inches or more....

Bad idea to change the category to LW, from the Noncon or BDSM of the other tales (that received a very good response in their right categories). This is clearly an out-of-place tale, and so the bad drop in the readers rating to a very negative 2.7 *.

Don't "carry it on"...This was bad enough for the entire life!

she beats her spoiled kid with a belt until hes unconscious, in the morning she bites the guys dick off. end of story

This belongs in "File 13"

please carry on, the haters just want to comment, they can choose to ignore, very good potential

2nd part

Could be better, come back to reality and try again. Eg. I've spread my charm and a few times my legs to get what I desired except not with the staff and/or whole team.

Nicely plotted, just a request include smoking cigarette from Ananya in next part

you already turned her into a cum dumpster, willing to betray everything she stands for to get some random dick. No need to add to it. It's pathetic enough as is.

fuck her in all holes