All Comments on 'Angel of Mine'

A great story I can not wait for the next chapter keep going I love the story

:-) :-D

I enjoyed reading your story.

Thank you

its ok, but rather read naga .

Please post more soon.

I hope you post more of this story soon. I am guessing her husband is gay and she is just a token wife so his secret is save, and he probably has a boyfriend somewhere. Otherwise her being a virgin after being married to that a..hole for years is beyond weird!

I really liked this. I liked the idea of an angel being able to be with a human. However, there are a few inconsistencies. Firstly, I haven't ever seen windows in a theater. Secondly, all the conversations get confusing. I can't tell which convesation is between her and Alex and which is he and her Grandfather. Maybe the discussions with grandfather can be in italics?

Can't wait for the next chapter. I do like Naga too. Please don't stop.

I like this story. I hope Victor gets what he deserves. I look forward to discovering more about Lisa and Alex.

Alex told Lisa she had been "out" for 2 weeks. If that were true, I would think she'd be in the ICU and wouldn't be eating solid food within a few hours of regaining consciousness.