All Comments on 'Angelina Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice...

This is good so far. Please don't turn her into an out of control whore...

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
That was awesome!

Wow!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
very special

I loved their internal monologues, and really did laugh out loud at Steve's panic a couple of times. Thanks for sharing this special story.

GreenleafRGreenleafRover 13 years ago
Slow and hot

Oh, my God! The situation is so hot, Angelina is so hot, her teasing is so hot. How is Steve handling this without blowing? Oh, and how can Dan handle this? OK, I can read how close he feels with Steve and the three of them but, how can he do this? I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.

ken1429ken1429over 12 years ago
Steamy hot !!!

This is the kind of story that really gets me hot and hard. It is the tease and flirt that are so erotic......move slowly to the final act.

jviperjviperover 11 years ago
This was hot

Hope the Author come back with other stories. A shame he's inactive because this story is what erotica should be about. The playfulness is great and the almost sex only adds to the story. Please come back

trace_ekiestrace_ekiesover 10 years ago
Angelina is hot!

Really hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
angelina is the sexyist

you need to wright more stories and adventures of her god she is sexy

newtype2525newtype2525over 9 years ago
Inedible, incredible, incredible!

I prefer slower paced seduction over a longer period of time, usually, but this blew my mind! Among other things! Thank you!

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