by R410a
What a fantastic love story. Just two people who have waited for a long time for the right person to come along. I had hope they would wait until married. I know, it's just the romantic in me, but you did a fine job without getting raunchy. Let the haters hate this is great.
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Cheers
Great story, Boss! Don't apologize for the characters getting away from you, they have a story to tell. Be patient I want to hear what they have to say! Looking forward to part 3.
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SAGE
Nice old fashioned romance, thank you…..let all the nay sayers go pound sand !! You write ‘em I’ll read ‘em
Great story.
[I just do not understand why there is a colour debate we are all humans period love knows no boundaries man made or otherwise]
Much better. Her being a virgin really added a LOT of romance. Wish you had finished it though.
Why does an author ever need to even mention the race of the characters at all? In far too many of liter's stories, the racial makeup is the central element, perhaps attempting to prove that in 2022 we still can't move past race as a barrier.
Oh my. If only we all could find such love. Thank you for giving us two such wonderful characters.
Just keep writing, I loved it. Great story about two people that are deeply in love and their journey to happiness. Had me laughing a couple of times, especially when Skye said she must have gotten hit with a slut ray :) Looking forward to the next chapter.
Awwsome storyline, and telling. You're writing it very enjoyable. I enjoy each story as it is written. Thank uou for the tales of fun, friendship amd love.
Great writing, keep it going, with you all the way. Can’t wait for Charli's reaction to seeing the ring!
A delicate matter skilfully handled. Congratulations on a story well told. Tender yet erotic.
I can't wait for the rest. This part was as great as all of your others. Another 10 stars.
I gave the first story in this series five stars. This one is even better, and I need more stars.
I peaked. at your next chapter, and your comment of your coming in second. That author that came in first, must have tipped the judges off. I've read all of your stories, and none of them were listed below 15 stars. by me. Keer up the great work.