by Theedgeofoz
It is both sounding more elaborate AND more plausible! Just not in my neighborhood! Hot, Hot, Hot!
I've just read two excellent new stories and I'm afraid this one doesn't begin to compare.
That is a slight irritant in reading what could otherwise be pretty hot.
It's pretty hot--all of the guys are loving and respectful, complimenting Anita and making it a very special day for her. It's got various errors in the writing, but the storyline is good. Anita's the center of attention and she gets her wish. A perfect fantasy!