All Comments on 'Ann: A Love Story Ch. 23'

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shadowsslaveshadowsslaveabout 15 years ago
Wild...

I'm sitting here trying to figure out how the hell Ann pulled all of this off in such a short amount of time! I loved how you wrote out this chapter. I really felt as though I was watching a James Bond movie! I was waiting for a helicopter to suddenly appear outside the window, lol. I can't wait to hear from Ann herself about how she managed to pull this whole thing off. I could see how she would know a lot about Neil from their talks, but a little weird though with how she knew all about Tina and bit unnerving with knowing even her show size too! I didn't know whether to be impressed...or maybe a bit scared about that thought, lol. Great chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
great chapter

one of the best so far. I like the direction the story is taking. And I still have to wipe the grin off my face. Thanks and keep 'em coming!

tompo296tompo296about 11 years ago
Brilliant

Loved this chapter, encore to 'shadowslave' ; her comments were spot on. In truth tis was absolutely fabulous, written with so much tongue in cheek to 'James Bond'. Superb

244Jake244Jakeabout 6 years ago
Bond, James Bond

Nice👍

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4ualmost 2 years ago

Awesomely brilliant, being a Bond fan as soon as Miss Galore was mentioned I knew ANNA was involved in the upgrades. The Bond theme was so well done, so many references, just bloody brilliant

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Updated 12/27/23: Hello again readers. As I stated in the previous update, writing has resumed, along with some editing. I'm currently writing chapter 30 of Betsy. Once I get done with that this week, I need to write at least two chapters of Ann that I've charted so as not los...

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