All Comments on 'Ann Submits to Mafia Dominion Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Sad. Depressing. Where is it going?

26thNC26thNCabout 2 years ago

Odd as it was boring Daddy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great work! Awaiting the next installment

Depressed_PersonDepressed_Personabout 2 years ago

Need to know what happens next! More releases!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Absolute garbage. Just stupid.

Ridiculous premise. You paint a picture of a pathetic man. Next installment? He takes a .38 and puts it in his mouth and pulls the trigger.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Well, since he just sentenced a person to die, will he do it again? Yeah, he would since he is a total wimp and unable to seek any kind of justice. But that is the point of the story, right? There is no justice here. Maybe the mafia guy will get tired of using Candy/Ann but he would not give her back, would he? Yeah, if he mindfucked her enough she could be a mole and rat out more opposition people. She would be sweet and loving to her ex-husband but be a total bitch in her real role. Or, maybe the mafia guy will have John have sex with another woman while Candy/Ann watched? So many options but none of them will have any happy ending.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

would love to hear Ann side of the story and what has happened to her

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

We need sequel to this story to see what happens to Ann in the end .Unfortunately it will end with her remaining as Candy .Ann will be history and forgotten.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

are you going do another part of this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

this story is so good man. please please give us some more!

dynasty919dynasty919over 1 year ago

man i am desperate to see what happened next to this poor couple. can he fuck her as a client in the club? maybe after she worked her shift and service 20 clients and he finally get his chance to see her? please keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

One of the best short stories on literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

please make part 3

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