All Comments on 'Anna Maria Ch. 03'

Hello Lilac, Love the newest chapter.... another beautifully written story by one of the most intelligent, literate, articulate, sexy writers on Lit. I can't wait to read your next submission.... Thank you.

Fantastic Lilac, Anna Maria is one cool chick, lucky Tony ;-) ... keep writing sis xo

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Hi LilacWine,

That was truly yet another fucking (no pun intended) fantastic story.

My mind was wandering and thinking about the part where....

"Tony sits for a moment enjoying the sight of her rump bouncing in her bather bottoms, her hair streaming wildly behind her."

When you write about lovemaking it has so much intensity and passion and it makes me feel like I am actually there playing out the scenes myself with Anna.

Brillaint Work, I was so turned on reading this my cock and balls were burning and my body began to tingle.

mmmm

xxxB

Tony and Anna are wonderful as main characters in this sensuous story. The different locations only serve to highlight in the reader's mind the beauty of the story. As the erotic activities get hot and heavy ~ this story sizzles. Wonderful Write! Sensuous Read!