All Comments on 'Anna's Inspiration'

Very very nice.

Sex in one line. "We're off to the rodeo," and that's the only description fo sex given. Please be more descriptive.

And, please follow English rules for quote usage.

Wonderful story, girl! I was hard as a rock all the way through. Why don't you write more? I'd love to read everything you come up with!

Woah, you gotta get those quotes under control. Unreadable. Not every individual spoken sentence gets its own set of quotes.