All Comments on 'Anna's Road Trip - Pt. 01'

Entertaining, erotically fun piece; like her introspection (and, no, not entirely sure where you are taking this story — can imagine a couple of scenarios. You write well.

This is a cute story.

You have written, so far, a great road trip-reuniting story.

Rated a 5+ fir a great erotic debut with a charmingly low-key (and authentic) camping back story.

I am looking forward to chapter 2 about Annie and James

Every success!

:-)

I recognize Ontario's non-modern facilities!

More, please

Interesting premise.

But, when sex starts, it moves ahead much too fast. Lacks details. Lacks tension. Lacks dialog about what eash wants to do to/with the other.

Three stars.

An editor/proofreader would have known you meanth BREATHE, not BREATH.

"my parents would rather breath in a lungful of car exhaust before pitching a tent."

Jekyll, thank you for a beautiful and sensual story! I loved the depth of the characters, and how the real and true to life inner dialog painted the picture. And yes, I can’t wait for part two,. Thank you again. Jerry