All Comments on 'Anne's Xmas Ornament for Patrick'

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RTR10RTR105 months ago

Interesting 2nd chapter. Anne seems to be really getting into this compared to the beginning of chapter 1, where she chickened out. I liked chapter 1 because Patrick made it all about Anne & a lot less about the other women. She was basically just an accessory. This time the OW and Patrick were verbally & emotionally abusive to Anne, which I guess is her kink. I do like that they don't use the same OW each time. Looking forward to chapter 3.

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