All Comments on 'Anniversary Vacation'

Describe the back story of the couple a little bit more. Is she a milf? How many kids does she have? You also should make the wife a little bit more reluctant and little by little she gets more comfortable and another thing don’t go to gang bang all the way. Give it some time, first she needs to try one black man one at a time

Very erotic writing. Try one with straight seduction as well.

Poor done. You don't think there would be any consequences???

I liked it as a quick fun read. You could have developed it out with back story etc, but I liked it as it is. You could make it a series of independent similar stories. You certainly have the imagination and writing skills to do so. Keep up the good work.