by inyotefi
At first I thought it would be a standard fuck-and-go story with the fast pickup, but no. It improved much after that. Nice sex scene.
You are a damn good writter, love the build up that made this such a steamy affair; sexy and hot. And how could you go wrong with Jessica Alba!
You should keep the story going! You did a great job,I would love to see the story continue and read what comes next,if u continue that is!
There just arent enough people writing about Jessica Alba anymore, so I was really exited reading this and it was Outstanding! Please can you write a 2nd chapter?!