All Comments on 'Another Alba Story'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Well done

At first I thought it would be a standard fuck-and-go story with the fast pickup, but no. It improved much after that. Nice sex scene.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
tastefully raunchy

You are a damn good writter, love the build up that made this such a steamy affair; sexy and hot. And how could you go wrong with Jessica Alba!

reader018reader018over 12 years ago
keep going

You should keep the story going! You did a great job,I would love to see the story continue and read what comes next,if u continue that is!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

There just arent enough people writing about Jessica Alba anymore, so I was really exited reading this and it was Outstanding! Please can you write a 2nd chapter?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Fantastic

I agree, post a 2nd chapter

Mojo648Mojo648over 5 years ago
Review

More please

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