All Comments on 'Another Homerun'

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ohnudeoneohnudeoneover 18 years ago
Thank you

Thank you. It makes me think of the first time I met my wife. I know I imagined the sex, but had the same feelings the first time I laid eyes on her. The sex came later.

I enjoyed it. Please write more

BabyBlue2005BabyBlue2005about 18 years ago
Wonderful!

I feel you wrote this very much from personal experience about someone you love. I loved the passion, confusion and vulnerability you suggest, it truthfully portrays all the hopes and fears of first time sex with that special someone. Write more, you have a talent, lady!

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