by JonThomas_
It's an okay story. Needs editing for sure.
But why not have a black man in a story that has a penis the size of any other man? It would make the story so much less stereotypical. The penises of black men are about the same as other men, but the myth continues due to what people see in porn flicks. Ask a woman who's been with a number of men and ask if she's encountered a monster cock--they haven't. As a woman, I haven't.
I know this is fantasy, but there is already enough to stretch the imagination to make it erotic--even the characters thinking about physical activity makes it interesting.