All Comments on 'Anticipation Is Sweet'

A friend asked me to read your story. Very well done. I saw one small spelling error , 'taunt' instead of 'taut' nipple but it certainly didn't detract from the story. Nice work!

Cookie

Your stories make me wish I still lived close enough to be in them with you! What fun we had, eh?

mmmmm well written you can imagine the heat in the car

Self-esteem Sister. Even if she wasn't someone his buddies would consider attractive, she obviously convinced him!

I just want to thank a friend of mine for giving me the best line in the story. "make a man of color blush" Thanks Chad Minnizal. :)

The eagerness of what was next make this such an exhilerating read. Thanks and I look forward to more.

Very nicely written. Enjoyed reading it. Xplore

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