All Comments on 'Anything For Love'

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2/5

Story and two main female chars makes no sense. Sarah is a virgin who just fucks two guys as a favour to a friend? A friend who apparently could just inorm Clark he was her boyfriend, just dropping the venom a bit... or changing how to express her 'love'. Slut friends and their antiques have no impact to actual story and are over the top. Not clear why she wanted him to be 'easy to control'. Basic premise (hot and pushy girl selected shy nerd to be her life partner... to love and dominate) could have been explored much better

It's author's first published story so I would like to be more positive - I suggest when waiting a story to thinking WHY given character would do something and either change the sequence or add a rationale. 'Martian skut ray' etc, actions out of character do not work well, even in short stories.

very enjoyable story. Well written.