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All Comments on 'Anything The Heart Wants Pt. 03'

by Rob_McCall4

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I think he should definitely try to be Kim's guy for awhile and teach her the joys of bwc sex maybe introduce her to jess

Ravus_SapiensRavus_Sapiensover 1 year ago

Pretty good. Again, I would have liked to have some indication of whose POV we're switching to, but aside from that, excelent writing.

A few spelling mistakes, but less than in the previous chapters.

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