All Comments on 'Anytime, Anywhere, Anyhow Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
too short

This chapter is written very well, and the romantic atmosphere is very good, but it could use some dialog and a little more insight into the makeup of the main characters.

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