by Sallys_beauty
I really love the build up of tension here and the characters are convincing, I cant wait for the next chapter! please post it soon
I really love your writing hon, you have every reason to feel confident in it! Can't wait to see the rest here!
okay, that was hot ... in fact ... I am going to have to make sure that fire is wearing her chastity belt around Y/you two after reading it ... beauty .. very well done .. you are a precious treasure to your Mistress and a delightful friend. Sally, I need that recipe for coffee .. grins ..
TQ
this is a grate story ,,,,,, cant wate for chapter 2. love Sallys twist is a real attention getter and a good way to sweeten Yyour coffee...giggles
love and respect
happy-shyguy~A~
beauty...i loved your story...and i hope there is more to cum. [chuckles] Sally is one lucky gal and i hope she appreciates you even more with this story.
Rhody
A beautiful (no pun intended) love story
sexy, wonderful with a lovely twist
Sally is so lucky to have you
keep it up hon
love Alan xxx
Thinking there's nothing better than pleasing one's Dom/mes ... such a lovely story... kudo's to you beauty.. girldreams
Wonderful writing beauty. i can't wait for the next story. Sally and you are so awesome together, i love Y/you guys. hugggggggggggggggggggs