All Comments on 'Apprehended Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Worth the wait!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Awesome

Welcome back. So glad you are continuing this story. Loved this chapter. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Best so far!!! Love you work! Already refreshing for number 8!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Fantastic!!!

I hope school is going well. We really missed you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
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So i randomly opened this story to read some erotic elements just to find out how full of fluffy love it is. Omg ethan is such a sweetheart, my heart melts the way the expresses their bond to annie, how much of they are destined to be together, how his only job is to live and protect his mate like i'm ╯﹏╰

Annie needs to open up a bit and i hope she will thoroughly embrace him and this new life enthusiasticly and won't do anything to harm ethan. He is such a sweetheart who knows how to treat a women :'(

A Great job author, i am highkey looking forwars for the upcoming chapters ♥

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
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So i randomly open this story to bask in some some erotic element just to be attacked with so much of fluff. Omg ethan is a sweetheart, the way he trears annie and tries to make her understand the bond they share and how his only purpose is to be live and protect his mate. He is an absolute sweetheart who knows how to trear a women and i hope annie opens her heart a bit for him. Embraces him and their bond thoroughly in the upcoming chapters. This was highly enjoyable so far. Looking forward to more good works from you author ♥

FlowergirljikookFlowergirljikookover 4 years ago
T_T

I was expecting some filth as its tagged in non consent but it turned out to be fluffy! Ethan is a through and through sweetheart. I hope annie warms up to him in the upcoming chapters. Will be looking forward to read the upcoming updates, so far i enjoyed all of this story ♥

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 4 years ago
Great characters and storyline.

Something about the dialogue is a bit flat but because I like the characters, I don't really care. Ethan reads her well but hasn't figured out she's insecure yet. And he doesn't realize she needs a choice, not because of him but because of herself. Annie's reactions are totally believable.

A bit more world building could be done but we might be getting to that as Annie gets an opportunity to leave the cabin.

Great work! Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

So happy to see the 7th chapter now! I'm so invested in this series, it's my favorite on the entire site. Cant said to see part 8!

Shawna1138Shawna1138over 4 years ago

I love it I hope to see Annie open up more to Ethan he is literally a fantasy and some sex scenes keep up the good work .

MickaHollowayMickaHollowayover 4 years ago
At long last

I've been waiting on this chapter and it didn't disappoint. I loved everything about it. Looking forward to ch 8

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Sad

I feel like.she forgot about us :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Love it!

When will you update?

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