All Comments on 'Apprehended Ch. 18'

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bucksumgalbucksumgalover 3 years ago

Oh, wow. Gavin. Quite the story.

I wonder if Annie will visit Lily soon. Maybe pass a note from the guy who wanted Lily's name? Explain that he was in an accident and that's why he hasn't called. Maybe bring Lily by to visit Gavin? He might heal faster if his mate is near. They could phone every day. Also, I'm sure Ethan will put a patrol near her house pronto.

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 3 years ago
I agree with Annie

If females are so inferior, why does Dina keep killing or almost killing the males? They should take her seriously.

And for goodness sake, stop letting Annie drink alcohol! I'm surprised she tolerated the taste.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Cant wait for dinas reckoning! My favorite thing about this series is how things are drawn out and detailed, nothing too quick or left out. Going to reread from part 1 while I wait for the next installment. Great job anniebaebee!

Becoming_PeleBecoming_Peleover 3 years ago

Anxiously looking forward to the next chapter in this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Well...

At least their up and coming surprise will cheer everyone up!

Great chapter!

Thanks for all your hard work.

Tess (UK)

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