All Comments on 'April Fooled 03/17/2019 15 min read'

Loved the plot. When you lose a substantial account, management goes nuts. Learning a substantial account is doubling, management celebrates. The sex wasn't bad, either.

Good luck in the contest.

I thoroughly read it in less than 5. I don't usually like writing done in the first person, but in this story it was appropriate.

Thank you for your comments. I used a calculator for the reading time. Adjusted it to slow reading. I wanted the time to read it to be less than advertised. Promise and then deliver more. lol. To keep the surprise ending I had to go first person. But honestly, I write in first person a lot. I'm glad you enjoyed the plot and I got through the sex writing. :) I appreciate everyone's input. ~Eros O. Joy

Good job on a short piece that fit together, entertained and left me smiling. Thank you!