All Comments on 'Arabella Saves the World Ch. 06'

A fine story, though I'm conflicted. I can't decide if it was a poor reward for Arabella or no.

Very engaging story. thanks.

You can write, but the characters have no depth and the dialogue lacks imagination.

The story is far too short for a series that's already up to its sixth instalment. Having looked at your profile, it's clear that you've got a rich history of breaking stories up into insufferably short chapters to flood the top lists and farm multiple hot ratings. On that basis, my rating has to carry a penalty for that nuisance factor.

As a result, your story flows in a workmanlike manner. Nothing pops, despite the fact that you've clearly got the ability to string a sentence together. You're capable of far more than this.

After penalties for flooding, this is a 30/100. Two stars.