by phoenixcinders
Its unbelievable to me how good you are at story telling. Half the time i forget im reading erotica and just enjoy the story.
I’ve enjoyed many of your titles, but this is by far my favorite. I truly hope you keep it going for a long time.
This is probably one of my favorite series on this website. And I've been on here for years! Really hope you keep the flame going!
But if I could make one minor suggestion, try adding in more detailed descriptions. For example, instead of saying "she brought back a plate of food" try "she brought back a plate filled with a variety a meats. Some looked to be from beasts I don't think I'd ever seen.". And describing how some of the orcs or characters look instead of just generic descriptions of "two male orcs walk in". This, gives just a little more life into your already excellent story.
Honestly one of the most interesting stories you have and that says a lot because I enjoy all of your writing. I would like to see the MC interact more with the tribe. Maybe go hunting save some of the orc pups prove his loyalty. Also would be interesting to see the affect of the magical seed he is provided.
Loved it. Just the right amount of non-sappy romance, good ass fucking AND a decent story. Can't get much better than that. Kudos to author
This part was great as well, my only dissappointment was that it was really short. Do you have plans for continuation? I hope that. Keep up the good work.