All Comments on 'Are You Sure About This?'

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HeyAllHeyAllabout 7 years agoAuthor
Author's Note

This is a re-edit of an old story of mine. In fact, it's one of my earlier stories.

Hope you all enjoyed it.

Special thanks to platinumpink for the edits.

- Heyall

SensualleeSensualleeabout 7 years ago
short and sweet

Nice teaser - I'd like to see more but this satisfies

de_grde_grabout 7 years ago
nice

Well written but I would like to know the gender of protagonist from the beginning of the story. I actually thought that it would be a women only story.

PantiespinkPantiespinkabout 7 years ago
Family time

I enjoyed your story and then I was there with smells and sounds and I then I was really into it, thanks

boatbummboatbummabout 7 years ago
I Was A Bit Surprised

On the wedding night that Angela didn't hop on his face and get a little tongue action while Mama rode her little stallion. Oh well, now that they're living together, I'm sure it's only a matter of time.... ;-)

Thanks for another fun time with a boy and his Mom!

blackknight314blackknight314about 7 years ago
A pretty good story of a mom and her son.

I liked having the lesbian addition to their lovemaking. I thought maybe Angela might peg him with her strap on before the end though.

JagnagJagnagabout 7 years ago
Good job

Hey, this was an allright story, loved the lesbien side to it, well written too.

Conrats n look forward to your next publishing.

Cheers.

prop69prop69about 7 years ago
OK..The son is fucking Angela as well as Mom plus other 3-way

Great trick to get son "in the game"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Bisexuality--at its best!

I absolutely loved the way you combined lesbian and straight sex in your glorious story. Thank you.

legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesabout 7 years ago
Enjoyed it

Well-written. Erotic. Arousing (had me touching myself - tits, nipples, and cock). Thanks for writing. Would love to be with two lesbians for a sexual adventure. Just think of me as a living dildo or vibrator! Will enjoy the fantasy!

rightbankrightbankalmost 7 years ago
Interesting variation

Nicely constructed.

thanks

ROCKY70ROCKY70almost 7 years ago
He should have.

knocked-up mom, what a wedding gift that could have been.

Familyguy469Familyguy469almost 7 years ago
Loved it

I agree with Rocky70, except knock both up. 1 could have a boy and 1 a girl and wait a few years and introduce them to the bedroom.

LonesomesoulLonesomesoulover 6 years ago
Yes yes- so good!

Enjoyed how you developed this story with incest and lesbian actions!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Are you sure about this.

Good story. Happy ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very Hot Story

I loved it. Very Hot and erotic. Lucky guy

olblueyesolblueyesabout 6 years ago

thats a twist i didn't expect,, liked it,

jneric2691jneric2691almost 6 years ago
Genuine Love

Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Fantastic ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hot story.........

BUT.............. it is impossible for a cock to pump cum into a womb.

I know, everybody and his brother, sister, mother, father, aunts, uncles and all there enemies write stories claiming that a cock can cum in a womb, or that it can cum in a cervix. They probably believe in ghosts and fairies too.

But regardless of what they all claim........ IT AIN'T SO..........

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

should be a second chapter where he impregnates both of them

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fantastic Love Story

Wish you added more stories like this. Read it three times.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

totally HOT....i think my mother played a bit from time to time...i was home one day and she a friend stop by...she made each of them a drink and went upstairs for a bit...i was a horny teenager so i kind of had an idea what was going on...i should have just acted on it...i have seen my mother completely naked and she was smokin...would have love to have nailed my sisters as well

tobytimtobytimover 4 years ago
Loved it

This is so hot and sexy, love your stories,,, most men would love a mother like that

BigJim48BigJim48over 4 years ago
Are You Sure About This & Angela

I gave you a 5 because the story is Hot! But I think that you should have spent a little time describing the 1st time that Angela had sex with the son. That would have added a lot to the story.

bumblegrumbumblegrumalmost 4 years ago
Excellent

Hot. Thoroughly enjoyable. Typical HeyAll expertise, and, for me, five stars; more if they were available. One very minor query - is it possible that Mum didn’t recognise her son’s body, touch or other triggers early in the piece? Never mind, very many thanks, HeyAll, for a fine and wholly erotic story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Sex with My Mother

That story reminds me of the time that my mother committed adultery while my dad was away. It was with me, her son. I really thought we were the only son and mother who had sex regularly. What a relief that there are others who are committed to this wonderful, innocent way of expressing family love. Now we are thinking about inviting my sister into our sexual bliss. Thank you so much!

mrdata9770mrdata9770almost 3 years ago

Interesting, a nice read. Just one year, why?? This would be a great beginning of a series. Maybe add some new young and mature characters.

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

i like the story a lot. AAAA++++

LSantiagoLSantiagoover 2 years ago

Fast delightful fantasy hitting on more cylinders than a formula 1 engine. great one to learn from,

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGover 2 years ago

Very fun and erotic story ... loved it... 5 stars

Kiwi4everKiwi4everover 2 years ago

Great up to your normal standard you do write great stories Thanks

Kiwi4everKiwi4everover 2 years ago

Another great story enjoyed so much Thank you

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASabout 2 years ago

This is quite the change-up in storylines...the mother's lesbian lover picks the son to be their live-in "boy-toy"...WHAT AN IMAGINATION YOU HAVE, to tell a story like this, get us all riled up!!

I have to agree with a couple of other readers, though...you REALY SHOULD WRITE MORE ABOUT THIS THREESOME! Well, how the relationship continues...I am not giving advice on how to write...just wanna see more, PLEASE!!

**5** STARS...DESERVES MORE, IN MY HUMBLE OPINION!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Nothing like a Horny that Loves Anal...

SatyrDickSatyrDickalmost 2 years ago

Fun, Hawt, und Sweet!

11/10 Anal Beads!!!!!

bob3641223bob3641223over 1 year ago

Your my favorite author now, you right everything i've loved and experienced i'm going to read everything you've written, and maybe in future u could try audio

bob3641223bob3641223over 1 year ago

I agree with maddogintexas, more like this when you write about them they come alive for us they become real.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Quite imaginative. Thx

5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

He joins his lesbian Mother and her gf in a threesome. That alone could have been better bcos if a Lesbian is having Sex with a man then she isn't a Lesbian at all, their is a reason why lesbians always break up with those that are bi curious, bcos if u are bi curious u are more likely to cheat with opposite

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

i had a threesome with my mom and her friend. both were married. mom ate her creampie i left. this thing does happen. love and peace

rlrmiller1951rlrmiller195110 months ago

that was really HOT!

ToughSailorToughSailor7 months ago

Webster says: "Thrust is the standard past tense form of the verb thrust. Thrusted exists, but usage is rare." This always seems to give me a slight speed bump when reading an otherwise perfectly enjoyable story. Love your prose . . . .

NawtyMeNawtyMe7 months ago

Now THIS was an AWESOME, LOVING story!!!!

I loved every word of it.

oksideshow859419oksideshow8594192 months ago

IDK I've read this story a couple of times and I enjoyed it 5⭐s both times yeah.... whoo.... But it seems to me that the story needs another chapter or two

lcsgmrlcsgmrabout 2 months ago

Very good, but could be continued.

AnonymousAnonymous6 days ago

A well written story with a lot of surprises ! I really enjoyed your efforts.

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