All Comments on 'Are You Tiffani Caine? Ch. 02'

This is exceptionally well written, but I fear it's going to take an awfully long time to really warm up. I know you are a man of rare perversions, with an acute talent for expressing them, but you may well test the patience of the reader with this story, if it continues at this pace.

Great tale with much more for Sara to experience.

@RelentlessOnanism It's something I certainly have thought about. Of everything I've ever written (completed, I should add) this chapter was the most challenging. So much character development had to take place in this chapter, and Sara is so alien from my own thought processes, that I have probably erased six times what I actually published, believe it or not. All I can say is that the next chapter will be much faster paced and less introspective.

This is fantastically written. Torment, anguish, aceptance, everything. I really hope there is more to come!