Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'Arena Wager'

by Dajaska

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 2 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

New Dajaska story! Woohoo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It feels like you've boiled this trope down to its raw essence, which isn't bad. But, personally, I'd prefer more specificity than 'the champion' or 'the girl'. This feels more like a plot outline than a plot itself.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login
userDajaska@Dajaska
11 Stories
175 Followers
Writer who focuses on monsters, transformation, mind break, mind control, corruption, and impregnation/breeding. Support me at: https://subscribestar.adult/dajaska