All Comments on 'Aristippus Ch. 04 - Tuesday Oral'

Fun chapter. I liked the lectures, the lab, and especially the Sam/except Sam part when they were choosing. The bathroom scene was a bit juvenile but there probably are guys like that out there, and the shower scene made up for it. His “it just happened” continued his juvenile streak; “it felt so good I just let it happen” is more like it but he made up for it in the end when he took care of her, too.

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I suspect we’ll see more of Don before this is over. Yes, they were good clues so I deleted the rest of this comment.

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Regarding writing, same comments apply as before though the ending was a little abrupt. We’ll probably learn more in the next chapter.