by TurinTurambar
Again, excellent composition that had me glued to the story. And again, the many mistakes and lack of proper punctuation was a big distraction. Please up you game here. If you do, you’ll become a well respected erotica author.
Very good second installment. My inusba few mistakes, this was a fantastic chapter. Cannot wait for the new one coming! Thanks for the entertainment!
Great story, got a little distracted unlike the first but amazing! When's the next story?
Great chapter!! I am loving the story! Wondering when the next chapter will be out.