All Comments on 'Art, The Story Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
VERY WELL WRITTEN

You definitely have me guessing where the story is going from here. It did make sense that Arilla was able to figure out that he was somehow a small adult, instead of a young child. The sex scene was very well written. It is going to be interesting to see how Suzanne reacts to this when (if) she finds out. For the story overall so far, I am amazed that Arty is able to stay relatively calm over his accident. I suspect I would be freaking out big time, not knowing whether I could return to my previous "normal" size. I know it is a small percentage but there are small adults due to "dwarfism". I think it would be interesting sometime in the future before Arty is restored to his previous "normal" size if he was to meet and have nice sex with a small woman.

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