All Comments on 'Artificial Affection Ch. 04'

Wow. What a way to end it. Amazing finish to an amazing story line!

You tied up everything nicely, no loose ends.

Great story. Only question I have is, if the original cocktail altered the girls on a genetic level to display a certain trait (drive to conceive during ovulation), why did that trait disappear after the first pregnancy? That's the only loose end as far as I'm concerned.

Afterwards all those kids inherited the altered genes and since they made the most babies a human-ferret subspecies slowly but steadily built inside the human population.

So I just got done rereading this series and noticed something. You didn’t include anything about Joey and Jasmine hooking up. What happened?

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11/10!!!!!

Excellent