All Comments on 'Artist Ch. 02'

Love your story! Keep going. Funny, I don't have a pussy but I do have a friend and that's what I call him in the morning. "My Friend" is always there when I need him.

bobkit

As a guy, two girls together is a real turn on, especially the way you described it. Well written. Can't wait for more

Can't wait for more, excellently written with true feeling

Instead of the steady diet of smash and grab sex, this story allowed readers to feel some actual heat from flesh and blood participants. I was happily witness to intimacy, not just the mechanics of bodies in close proximity.

always been the mark of a woman for me. Sometimes it gets in the way, but it reminds me THIS is all woman. And I like the lyrical nature of your story.

Your story is like the picture very beautiful and tender. Where do I find part 2.

Wow! That was so erotic (and I think it's PartII labeled as III?).

The nipple plays and when she plays with herself were the best parts. But the thought of her sketching 2 women making love was damn sexy! Thanks for making me wet!

Read you soon (I hope)!

Kris

I really like this story, and love the wonderful comments I'm getting. Would love to hear from especially the women who like this story, send me email via the feedback link and if you give me a reply address I will try to write back.

By the way, the numbering error is literotica's, not mine!

Ohhhh I'm So happy To Know That Chapt 3 is Done & Posted

Kisses

Can't wait for part III

The erotic descriptiveness of your writing is beautifully lyrical and deeply feminine in the intimate feeling it converys.

I just re-read this. I love how , as I read it I am transported to that park and to that studio. You already know how I can identify with the characters, but in this case I rather think I would like to be the blond.... with so much to look forward to.....

Affectionately

Corinne x

I used to think no one can be as good as Anais, but you are so descriptive, so gentle and erotic.

Love it hon.

Oriana

Would have been better if she was not married but still good

I can't think of a more opposite word to describe the buildup of sensations you describe here - and which you convey so vividly that I felt almost as though I were the recipient of those wonderful caresses!

Damn this was good!

Oh my .... just lovely.

So lovely, but after chapter 1. I didn’t expect anything less. Beautifully written and so sensuous that my body felt it too. Thank you.

Love the way this develops so warmly, sensuously. Made me come out in goosebumps several time. Great writing. x

well written

the details are exquisit

thank you

It was lovely. Made the hair on the back of my neck tingle. Thank you for sharing your gift as a writer, who obviously knows how to turn a girl on :) Until we meet again.

This story has moved me in a manner in which it’s very erotic and arousing. It was extremely lovely, so well written and grasping for more. The simple means of how you described her touch and then how the artist brought you over the top or just absolutely spectacular.. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

This is so sexy - I'm pretty sure I've read this before. The accidental nipple touch at the beginning gets things going, but when the dialogue starts is when this really gets hot. The "Close your eyes," followed by the "Where should I touch you?" to the "Show me." That "Show me" is sexy for so many reasons, the intimacy and the connection and the desire to please. It's a lovely moment.

So Good!

Yes please to the next part