All Comments on 'As It Seems Ch. 06'

Another chapter! Good to see a "softer" side to Connor as well. :-)

This is all very confusing. I think you need to work on your explanations a little more. You throw details in, but you leave it too vague. This is turning into a big mishmash mess. You've got too many things going on. Focus. Focus. I get what you're going for, but it's not working and you're just leaving your readers scratching their heads. Work on fleshing the story out a bit more, give us more detail and description of what's going on. Your characters can be in the dark, but help your readers out and turn a light on for us at least.

I had to go back to read the previous chapters because I forgot what the story was about. You started Chapter 6 but it was not a continuation of Chapter 5. I felt lost! Focus on 1 couple at a time.

i gettin so confused in which couple y are tryin to focus on in this story

This chapter was confusing. Not sure what the beginning was about.

This is a great story!!!! Some might find it confusing but I just read the first six chapters striaght thru and I think it is easier to read them in bunches than one at a time. I cant wait for you add a few more.

I hope you don't let all the negative comments stop you from continuing on with the story. As an aspiring writer myself, I know how hard it is write and then submit stories for public viewing. Keep up the good work.

I love it! Keep up the great work!!!

I love this story so far, but im wondering what the story is on Alexa and her brothers parents?

I love the relationships and the unraveling of the plot. Please finish this series. I am in love with Alexa's strength and Nathan's commitment. Secret under secret under secret...

...this story. I just came across it and it is very interesting. I am feeling the characters and the plot. I hope you get to finish this story.

Are you okay? Where are you? We need you to finish this story, post and let us know what has happened and if you plan to finish the story.

Close but "no cigar! Connor and Alexa are quite hot together! I can not wat until they fave actual sex!

Almost...they came close them freaked it up as usual... fools