All Comments on 'Ashley & Becca Ch. 01'

I'm a bitch and thought I had read this already...smack me later....please???

...but that takes me totally out of my normal mode for commenting!

I like the set up. From this point you have a lot of ways you can go and you've already set up some potential conflicts and initiated one. There's enough of a hook in finding out what will happen between Ash and Cor to keep people reading. On to Chapter 2.