All Comments on 'Ashley the Cow'

Interesting premise.

But rushed.

Jumps from scene/action with very little in the way of details.

And you sould use an editor/proofreader. You wrote: "He pressed his throbbing cock against her damp limps,..." LIPS, not LIMPS.

Three stars.

"She had a bucket wrapped around her arms" Now that is a neat trick.

Slow down... and spell/grammar check. Then get it proof-read by someone else. You won't find your own mistakes.

Good premise though.

Erotically different

I'm just thinking about how even prisoners in tightly guarded prisons sometimes manage to riot and rebel, which makes the premise a bit doubtable.