by Unbearable_Desire
so basically - you gonna stop doing ` My Japanese Mom,My Boyfriend's B.W.C. ` ........
than somebody else needs swoop along take that
@Crank, you are BY FAR my most impatient fan. I appreciate the enthusiasm, but I don't enjoy being continually pressured / criticized for not meeting your specific expectations. I'm an artist, I have to work in my own way.
I said on another comment section that I would return to 'MJM, MBF's BWC' after finishing this trilogy. Now that it is complete, I aim to have the next instalment finished within 2 weeks. Please bear with me.
U_D
Overall the sex and white/asian dynamics were good, but not really clear on why Billy just suddenly showed up. A bit more background or build up might have been nice.
Also the daughter/mom trope felt a bit forced. I don't mean it in a negative way but the mom insert seemed like it was just to humiliate another weak Asian woman--just because she's never seen a bwc and has a bossy daughter.
I still think this series has potential and I do enjoy your work.
Was hanging out for this chapter and it delivered. Just wish it was longer.
@notconcerned
I understand your points though I respectfully stand by my choices.
In film, for example, its fairly common to have such situations (where the viewer is left to assume the most obvious likelihood). In this case, that Billy and Jia had arranged to meet at hers.
Also I don't mean to imply that Asian women are in any way weak. My work is focused on Asian women and white men, though I dont believe Asian women are different to any others. It is simply my own sexual preference, the coupling that I find most arousing. I believe I could easily change the ethnicities in my stories and I dont believe the crux of each story would be lost.
Thank you for the feedback regardless, I do want to become the best writer I can be. Take care.
U_D
Another effin home run out of the park, U_D!!
I luv how you manage to always weave your "prudish Chinese mom" into most of your stories and how she goes from prim and proper to slut for BWC and her daughter's pussy. Looking forward to the next chapter in this series.
Writerotica/Ray
Great story, incredibly hot sex scenes, and a refreshingly realistic depiction of women. The juxtaposition of the main characters desire is incredible consistent with a woman's attraction: a slovenly lecherous man unto revulsion and a fit, commanding man unto wantonness. Thanks for sharing this story. 5/5
(Also, thanks for having a story that isn't about a crappy woman dissing all over a guy)
OMG you hit every sexual thrill I've every wanted. I have to read all of your stories now.
Excellent series! Thank you for writing and posting your stories. I was interested to read the comments; to pick up on an earlier thread, I didn’t experience Jia’s mom as being weak or humiliated. She had already been portrayed as very strong, so I found her response making me think about her past (like Jia’s said), her passions, what might be revealed about her character. As I write this, it occurs to me that maybe some of Jia’s sexual traits were actually inherited from her mom.