All Comments on 'Asking Why'

Liked it; could have loved it but not sure that re-reading will help answer the questions that linger for this reader. Maybe that is intended. So much potential — could feel the pain and near bewilderment. Will she ever know why? Get a response? Hope you share more from your imagination.

First story!

4

***Thanks for the read.

As Clint Ballard Jr. knew way back in 1963:

"Feelin' better now that we're through

Feelin' better, 'cause I'm over you

I learned my lesson, it left a scar

Now I see how you really are

You're no good

You're no good

You're no good

Baby, you're no good

I'm gonna say it again

You're no good

You're no good

You're no good

Baby, you're no good"

And some 1968 advice from Graham Nash:

"And so become yourself because the past is just a goodbye".

Every day is a new day but some lessons are timeless.

5*'s