All Comments on 'Aspen and the Auditor Ch. 01'

Interesting story, looking forward to the next chapter.

I'm not into bdsm, so the bandage elements of the slavery wasn't appealing to me. I'll pass on this series and stick with Amy's story.

Great start. Can't wait for more. I like my BDSM soft and I hate unnecessarily cruel physical punishments or abuse.

LOVE THIS STORY'S TAKE ON JUDICIAL SLAVERY THEME. I HOPE THERE ARE MORE CHAPTERS TO COME!

Good job. Attachment conditioning is such an insidious addition to the legal slavery universe. Hopefully chivalry is not dead and Arthur steps up and does his duty by having regular sex with his new slave. I am looking forward to the next installment.

Excellent story, next part please.

Hey folks. There is going to be more chapters but the next one probably won't be until mid next week. Though I have an outline other writing projects and my real job are going to eat up my time for the rest of the week. Believe me, I wish I could just work on this rather than deal with my paying job!

Great so far, excited to see where this goes

Nice start, well written with interesting characters. The concept of an auditor has good potential, another angle on the systemic corruption aspects of that often occurs in these alternative universe.

The hope Aspen hadn't been indoctrinated yet seemed a bit off for an auditor. If it's part of the official process, he would expect that it would be worrisome if it had not been carried out correctly. Not saying he wouldn't wish otherwise, but I think you missed an opportunity to show Arthur's auditors mindset.