by PrimeOptimal
Didn’t like the brutality of the scene much. I had liked the storyline up until this point.
agreed with mermaidlover. your first two stories were excellent because of the way luke succumbed mentally and emotionally slowly with being with a "disgusting man". would be nice to see him do so in a way that he's still in control not a mindless hole used for pleasure. maybe he accepts what he likes and willingly becomes a boyfriend to them? but thanks keep up the good work!
Looking forward to more in this series and more from you. Love how it started and that the main character is a hot ambitious guy that'll do anything to get ahead. The forced and reluctance angle is hot.