All Comments on 'At First Sight Ch. 01'

You have sort of dropped the reader into , a story with out a lead in, and no character development. As a stroke story I guess it might work, but I dearly hope you continue with far more character development, and maybe some of the romance this category is supposed to be. Yes you put in a fair amount of hard work, to get to this point, and as readers we want more.Ultimately it is your story, and just my thoughts as a reader.

NorthPacific

I truly enjoyed the intrigued. Very heart felt. Super saucy. Hoping there is more to come.