All Comments on 'At the Bank Ch. 01'

Great start. I would like to see the characters developed a little more. We already know he's lusted after her for a long time. How about her? Why did she do it? Where else did they secretly meet? You could do alot with this story. Please add more chapters. :) kim in usa

He made himself an accessory to a crime and committed one by not reporting it. Why is this a multi chapter story? Clearly both he and the woman are complete morons.

Not bad. Does she have a boy friend to clean her out?