All Comments on 'At the Feet of the Cock God'

Fuck off with the Daddy shit. Sorry, just can't stand it.

Aww, don't be so harsh, Jimmy. The wife calling her husband "daddy" isn't my thing either, but the under-the-desk submissive cock worship while he's working is a hot scenario.

Nonsense ridiculous fantasy. 1*

Present tense is awkward.

I’m surprised that she reads….not bad for your first story on Lit. Thx

While not as bad as many that are posted here, this seems to be more geared towards the fetish crowd and probably should have been posted there. There weren't many of the BDSM themes beyond the overuse of "Daddy" but it also might have gone over well in that category.

I’m with JimmyTheP on this one. The “Daddy” bullshit kills it.

Another Anon got it right; should have been in the Fetish category. Maybe they would give it a high score but for me it was just a lot of BS.

In order, then;

- criticism of content/style without alternatives/options = abuse. Work has clear ddlg tag.

- Loving Wives v Fetish = to each, their own. Whatever 'works' for all parties involved.

- 'anonymous' comments are universally ignored...always...especially for authors.

In the meantime, attractive setting, setup and narrative. Great start...Welcome, HglK