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OleGrumpy7OleGrumpy7almost 4 years ago
Some editing might be in order

I got very confused when the daughters name went from Emily to Helen. Not sure if this story started one way or in another form but it sorta feels like it. As always, I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks.

oggbashanoggbashanalmost 4 years agoAuthor

Thank you OleGrumpy7. The story has now ben edited to make the daughter's name consistent.

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