All Comments on 'August Heat'

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taxpapabob over 14 years ago

August Heat

Good HOT JUICY sex shared with true affection! The writing is just fine, although I'd prefer a couple more giggles. Top 5-star rating!

digdaddyrich over 14 years ago

A little short but a good start for a longer story

I'd like to know how they got to the point that he is fucking her. What led up to the actual fact that he was able to get her into a situation that she would give up her pussy to an older man. Write another chapter and explain all of the needed fact that brought them to this point.